Character+sketch

A man with a not giving up spirit and a fearless mind, he use up all his bravery to fight over the nature, his name is Dave Conroy. His bravery makes all the devils around him get scared, he is using all his brave to fight and struggle with those icy devils. His bravery is shocking everyone that knows him, the bravery inside him give an enormous power to let him continue to solving every problems he has. He is not only brave, he also got a fearless mind. He wants to become a fearless person ,by using his bravery to control the fear inside him. The cold wind and white snow are throwing towards him, blindness and cracking river are putting on him, the fear of death is beating him. The reason he is still alive, because he did not give up, he knew there are hopes and chances, and he knew hope is a very dangerous thing to lose. He used all his bravery and fearless to make the mountain give a pave to allow him to pass through. It depends on how much bravery he has and how strong does the fearless controlling him.

Great ideas Ben. We need to work on sentence structure and some word usage issues. 4.5/6 Ben Jiang

4.5/6 Why because were a few errors but over all was very well Aaron Tlucko

Aaron Tlucko doesn't do his work.