The fountain can create world war 3, because the fountain is so valuable, so people fight to gain that fountain.
The time won't go forward again, people that didn't drink the water are leaving you on every moment.
The water can make the human become a hungry animal, it control the human and make us to be its slaves.
We need to work for the fountain, pray to the fountain, the world will soon become a new paradise of bad people.
Positive
No more people die, what a paradise for people to live in .
People can live longer
You can go back and change your past.
The human body will stay the same.
The human mind will get more clear.
People can go back in time.
Getting a health body.
Setting
In 1996, september 10, the snow was hitting my house, there was a man knocking on my door, the night was long.
Main Conflict
Man vs. Self
The main conflict is my character believed in fountain of youth, he always wants to see the fountain of youth, as he didn't know
about anything about the body check he did, he was ran into his dream, finished his last hope.
What do you know about this character now that s/he doesn’t yet know? He always fear, old and always can't decide a thing that is wrong or right.
What is this character’s greatest flaw? He need to make a decision between he wants to be come young again or not.
What do you know about this character that he would never admit? He never admit he killed her wife.
What is this character’s greatest asset? His greatest asset is he never kill a living thing, he is a very gental man.
If this character could choose a different identity, who would s/he be? He wants to be a man than can change people's destiny.
What music does this character sing to when no one else is around? He sing some classic music when no one else is around.
In what or whom does this character have the greatest faith? This character have the greatest faith in his mother and wife.
What is this character’s favorite movie? His favorite movie is " Bucket List".
Does this character have a favorite article of clothing? Favorite shoes? He loves to wear old fashioned jackets and shoes.
Does this character have a vice? Name it. He always called himself is a murderer.
Name this character’s favorite person (living or dead). His favorite person is his wife that already past away.
What is this character’s secret wish? His secret wish is wanting a new wife to take care of his kid.
What is this character’s proudest achievement? His proudest achievement is he become a professor, and won the "The Nobel Prizes of Chemistry and Physics".
Describe this character’s most embarrassing moment. The character's most embarrassing moment is he forgot his wife has been dead.
What is this character’s deepest regret? He made a wrong decision, and that decision is enough to kill his wife.
What is this character’s greatest fear? He fear his lover will leave him again.
Describe this character’s most devastating moment. The moment he can't take care of his son, the only thing that can take care of his son is a woman, so he trying to find a woman that can help him take care of his son, but he also afraid of his lover will leave him again.
What is this character’s greatest achievement? His greatest achievement is he won the Nobel Prizes.
What is this character’s greatest hope? His greatest hope is wishing time can go back.
Does this character have an obsession? Name it. His obsession is he always think he killed his lover, but in fact, he didn't kill his wife, the robber did.
What is this character’s greatest disappointment? He missed the most important test in his life.
What is this character’s worst nightmare? He is so upset, because he can't accept his wife is dead, he forgot everything, even the most important ceremony he has been missed.
Whom does this character most wish to please? Why? The character most wish to please to god, because he always blame why the god took away his wife.
Describe this character’s mother. His mother is a very nice women, she writes a lot of poems.
Describe this character’s father. His father is a scientist, he is a biologist, he learns how to make a person become young again.
If s/he had to choose, with whom would this character prefer to live? He will prefer to live with his own happy family.
Where does this character fall in birth order? What effect does this have? He don't have any sibling, his parent are busy, so he lost the whole childhood.
Describe this character’s siblings or other close relatives. He don't have any sibling, but he have a cousin. His cousin is a murderer, he put in jail 2009.
Describe this character’s bedroom. Include three cherished items. His bedroom has old CD players, old fashioned televisions. His cherished items are : his wife's clothes, the pillow that he sleep with his wife in the past, and the diary of youth magic that his dad left behind.
What is this character’s birth date? How does this character manifest traits of his/her astrological sign? The character's birth date is september 22 /1966.
If this character had to live in seclusion for six months, what six items would s/he bring? The diary of youth magic, walkman, clothes, tooth brush, medicine, and his notebook.
Why is this character angry? He is angry about why his destiny is so ruined, and he always blame about why god took away his wife.
What calms this character? The quote that her mom always reminding him can calm him down. The quote is " left hand is your destiny, right hand is your chance, both hand is your effort".
Describe a recurring dream or nightmare this character might have. He always having a same dream, and the dream is about the moment his wife get killed.
List the choices (not circumstances) that led this character to his/her current predicament.
List the circumstances over which this character has no control. The circumstances are: His wife being killed in front of his eyes, his parent past away when his was five.
What wakes this character in the middle of the night? The dream that he got over and over again, it always wait him middle of the night, he always can't go back to sleep after he woke up in the middle of the night.
How would a stranger describe this character? bad, fear, no encouragement, not a energetic person.
What does this character resolve to do differently every morning? He being exhausted every morning, and having a pair of panda eyes.
Who depends on this character? Why? His wife depends on this character, because he think love is everything.
If this character knew s/he had exactly one month to live, what would s/he do? He will doing everything she wants, he will make this person don't have any hopes.
How would a dear friend or relative describe this character? A smart, calm, unpredictable person.
What is this character’s most noticeable physical attribute? His most noticeable physical attribute is he can do something that a normal human can't do it.
What is this character hiding from him/herself? He keep hiding from the truth of his wife being dead.
Write one additional thing about your character. My character loves classic music, he is a pretty old fashioned person, he never trust there are a good future.
5. How does the main character change over the course of the story?
The main character change over the course of the story by didn't realized where he is in the last part of the story. 6. Describe the use of Irony in your story.
The irony in my story is that the main character get into a place where he also wish to be, but he didn't realize the place
where he always wants to see is the last place for him to stay, and live. 7. What symbols are present in your story? The symbols are His dead cousin knocking on his door at night, thinking his wife singing with the angels,
his shadow covered the shadow from the fountain, also the wolf, the wolf has always been a symbol of evil as well as good, or a reflection of the mysterious, untamed wilderness. 8. What is the theme of your story? The theme of my story is " The fountain of youth is the end of your life, when you pass away, everything will being a blank piece of paper, the past will became future, everything will end if you saw the fountain of youth.
One cold winter night, the strong wind was knocking on my house, the snow was falling down like pieces from the blank papers , and my day’s work makes me so exhausted and makes me want to fall sleep. In the middle of the night, someone was knocking on my front door, it wakes me up, I getting so angry and I swear I will use the baseball bat and smash in that person’s head. While I was going to open the door, everything around me is dead silent; everything seems darker than normal night. I was very curious about who was knocking at my door in the middle of the night. When I opened the door, my heart was shocked, and my heartbeat was going faster, my entire face was turning into red. “Hi Benson, long time no see”, said he. I asked myself “Am I dreaming or sleep walking”? I shake my harden rock brain, “ I am not dreaming”! When I stared at my cousin, he rolled into the snow and gone faster than the wind. I shut the door and clam myself down, a shadow past behind me, a familiar shadow of the back of my wife. But as I go closer to the shadow, my shadow cover it up. My wife’s shadow seems don't want me to get closer, the only thing I can do now is go back into my bed, and save my energy for tomorrow’s interview. A new day has been born; I was going to get rid of that exhausting job. I need to interview for a new job during my short lunchtime, I am old, and it is very hard to get a new job for the last part of my life . The people are nice; they are very happy and relaxed. I am very nervous about the interview, my hands and feet were shaking, in other words, my whole body was shaking. How embarrassing is that. The manager walk into the room, his eyes are shooting electricity at me, my whole body shakes again. “ Let’s start the interview”, said he. “ Hello, nice to meet you”. he said “ Oh hi, it is my honor to meet you”. I replied “Do you have any work experience”? he asked “Yes I do, I am a very hard worker, I am not lazy, and I am nice”. I replied “ Do you have kids, siblings, wife”? he asked “ I do not have kids, but I have a wife, but she is already playing with the angels, and smiling in the sky. I replied “ Oh, I’m so sorry, thanks for doing the interview, we will get back to you soon”. I slowly walk out of the building and take a deep breath, “ I failed this interview for sure, and young people beats old man. Suddenly, the blood pressure in my head is increasing; I woke up. It is the middle of the night, I don’t know why I got a major headache and a weird dream, by the way, someone was knocking on my door again! Is my door very popular for people to knock? It is not Halloween yet. If there are kids playing around with my door, I am going to use a water gun to shoot them away, for sure! I walk down to the stairs with the squeaky sound of the stairs and movement of the spiders making the environment around me seem scary and lonely. The doorknob is colder than normal, the door lock is harder to turn, the door is harder to push, a man with a sad face is standing in front of my door. “Oh my gosh, aren’t you dead already”? Said I. “ I missed my entire life, I exchange my happiness for money, happiness has wings, like monies, you must cut both the wings off, then it won’t fly away”, saidmy cousin. After he told me the words, his tears drop down on the floor and broke into pieces, and then he change to mist, with the wind blowing him toward he road of heaven. I hurry to make an appointment with voice messages to my family doctor, I wonder is my old brain still working at this moment. After I did a full body check, I was thinking the years of youth, and I should falling into the river of love if I am young again. My days from death are not far, I need to be young again, the fountain of youth can help me, but that still is a mystery for, no one knows if the fountain of youth exists or not. The time is passing fast, soon the sky turned dark; the moonlight was reflecting my personality, I am so tired for the days of old, the only thing I can do is go back to my house, and get some sleep. I go back into my bed, and close my eyes. The sun is gone, it is not shining at me today, and a man was standing in a different place during the lonely night, that person is me. My life is like a cup of lemonade, sometime sweet sometime bitter, you never know what is going to be next, life is a mystery. Suddenly, a fountain is standing right in front of me.
As the steps from me get closer to the fountain, the fountain walk away with the same pace as me. I saw my cousin standing behind the fountain, it is so weird why I keep seeing him again and again, “Is this my destiny”? This time he told me with smiles, “ fountain of youth is right in your heart, it is not in front of your eyes, try to use your inside to feel the existence of the fountain of youth”,he said. I close my eyes, following what he told me, but everything turns black after I close my eyes, until I heard a fresh, mild sound of running water, the fountain of youth appear in front of me. But this time, the fountain of youth didn’t walk away from me.
The water as pure as diamonds as I looking at it, and it also reflecting everything as the diamond did. I can see what happen to the young people inside the water, the fountain is throwing a bunch of questions on me. I am trying to answer those questions, but- but I can't. My tears dropping into
the fountain, “ I know I will do the same thing as the people in the fountain did”.
We all need to leave this lovely world some day, this is our human's destiny, or cycle of life. I can barely drink the water from the fountain to gain the love from my other half, but what happens if my other half dies faster than me? Everyone has a limit, either pass the limit or fail at the limit point, if my other half dies faster than me, then I need to against the pain of losing my other half again and starting the same thing as I did in the past, I can't take this, I am too tired for my entire life, my life is done, the flower inside me is losing power, the sunshine isn't giving me enough for my flower to survive, everything is over, is over!
The fountain isn't pure after it gives me a bunch of questions, the fountain is gone, its gone far away from me, because my blood polluted the pure water, my tiredness makes me want to sleep, my body was lying far from the fountain, a moment of eyes shut bring me to the place where my cousin and my wife live in, I know I left the lovely planet, and dancing with angels, my wife, and my cousin, I am happy, I can starting everything in here again, the things what I did in the past is cover by dust, no one will ever know. The fountain of youth gives me a big lesson, a lesson can make me realize the meaning of happiness.
“Beep... Hi Mr. Benson, this is your family doctor calling, we have the report for your check up, there are some problems we need to discuss , can you come in to see me as soon as possible?"
Negative
Positive
Setting
In 1996, september 10, the snow was hitting my house, there was a man knocking on my door, the night was long.Main Conflict
Man vs. SelfThe main conflict is my character believed in fountain of youth, he always wants to see the fountain of youth, as he didn't know
about anything about the body check he did, he was ran into his dream, finished his last hope.
5. How does the main character change over the course of the story?
The main character change over the course of the story by didn't realized where he is in the last part of the story.
6. Describe the use of Irony in your story.
The irony in my story is that the main character get into a place where he also wish to be, but he didn't realize the place
where he always wants to see is the last place for him to stay, and live.
7. What symbols are present in your story?
The symbols are His dead cousin knocking on his door at night, thinking his wife singing with the angels,
his shadow covered the shadow from the fountain, also the wolf, the wolf has always been a symbol of evil as well as good, or a reflection of the mysterious, untamed wilderness.
8. What is the theme of your story?
The theme of my story is " The fountain of youth is the end of your life, when you pass away, everything will being a blank piece of paper, the past will became future, everything will end if you saw the fountain of youth.
One cold winter night, the strong wind was knocking on my house, the snow was falling down like pieces from the blank papers , and my day’s work makes me so exhausted and makes me want to fall sleep. In the middle of the night, someone was knocking on my front door, it wakes me up, I getting so angry and I swear I will use the baseball bat and smash in that person’s head. While I was going to open the door, everything around me is dead silent; everything seems darker than normal night. I was very curious about who was knocking at my door in the middle of the night. When I opened the door, my heart was shocked, and my heartbeat was going faster, my entire face was turning into red.
“Hi Benson, long time no see”, said he. I asked myself “Am I dreaming or sleep walking”? I shake my harden rock brain, “ I am not dreaming”! When I stared at my cousin, he rolled into the snow and gone faster than the wind. I shut the door and clam myself down, a shadow past behind me, a familiar shadow of the back of my wife. But as I go closer to the shadow, my shadow cover it up. My wife’s shadow seems don't want me to get closer, the only thing I can do now is go back into my bed, and save my energy for tomorrow’s interview.
A new day has been born; I was going to get rid of that exhausting job. I need to interview for a new job during my short lunchtime, I am old, and it is very hard to get a new job for the last part of my life . The people are nice; they are very happy and relaxed. I am very nervous about the interview, my hands and feet were shaking, in other words, my whole body was shaking. How embarrassing is that.
The manager walk into the room, his eyes are shooting electricity at me, my whole body shakes again. “ Let’s start the interview”, said he.
“ Hello, nice to meet you”. he said
“ Oh hi, it is my honor to meet you”. I replied
“Do you have any work experience”? he asked
“Yes I do, I am a very hard worker, I am not lazy, and I am nice”. I replied
“ Do you have kids, siblings, wife”? he asked
“ I do not have kids, but I have a wife, but she is already playing with the angels, and smiling in the sky. I replied
“ Oh, I’m so sorry, thanks for doing the interview, we will get back to you soon”.
I slowly walk out of the building and take a deep breath, “ I failed this interview for sure, and young people beats old man. Suddenly, the blood pressure in my head is increasing; I woke up. It is the middle of the night, I don’t know why I got a major headache and a weird dream, by the way, someone was knocking on my door again! Is my door very popular for people to knock? It is not Halloween yet. If there are kids playing around with my door, I am going to use a water gun to shoot them away, for sure! I walk down to the stairs with the squeaky sound of the stairs and movement of the spiders making the environment around me seem scary and lonely. The doorknob is colder than normal, the door lock is harder to turn, the door is harder to push, a man with a sad face is standing in front of my door.
“Oh my gosh, aren’t you dead already”? Said I.
“ I missed my entire life, I exchange my happiness for money, happiness has wings, like monies, you must cut both the wings off, then it won’t fly away”, saidmy cousin. After he told me the words, his tears drop down on the floor and broke into pieces, and then he change to mist, with the wind blowing him toward he road of heaven. I hurry to make an appointment with voice messages to my family doctor, I wonder is my old brain still working at this moment. After I did a full body check, I was thinking the years of youth, and I should falling into the river of love if I am young again. My days from death are not far, I need to be young again, the fountain of youth can help me, but that still is a mystery for, no one knows if the fountain of youth exists or not. The time is passing fast, soon the sky turned dark; the moonlight was reflecting my personality, I am so tired for the days of old, the only thing I can do is go back to my house, and get some sleep. I go back into my bed, and close my eyes. The sun is gone, it is not shining at me today, and a man was standing in a different place during the lonely night, that person is me. My life is like a cup of lemonade, sometime sweet sometime bitter, you never know what is going to be next, life is a mystery. Suddenly, a fountain is standing right in front of me.